My 1st Label in January Pre-Crit:
People had a big problem w/the text and suggested I pick something more playful in terms of font and placement.
People had a big problem w/the text and suggested I pick something more playful in terms of font and placement.
Post Crit#1:
I decided to can the above label and go with what Rezvan suggested: have them associated with the fruit of the drink. J.Arias claimed the font to be too heavy with the black and I agree- canned again!!!
1 comment:
i like this one. I am not so sure about the writting. i think the illustration needs a font that is part of the enviroment. they fond is black, heavy. Your illustration is fun, and it has motion.
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